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“I hate the cold,” Hidan complained, dragging his feet through the mountains of powdery, white snow before him; forcing him to waddle like a penguin. His companion, Kakuzu, showed just as much effort when it came to plowing through the snow. Kakuzu’s remained glancing at the direction they were facing when he generally spoke, “Isn’t it normally cold in your home village?”
“Yeah, yeah,” Hidan responded nonchalantly, shifting his weight from one foot to the other, “But it’s a different kind of cold. This cold is a bitter, sour one, while the cold back home is a… warm kind of cold.”
“Warm cold,” Kakuzu questioned. Hidan playfully pushed the slightly confused Kakuzu, almost tipping him into the snow, “I  know it sounds retarded. I guess you wouldn’t understand.”
Silence grew quickly back, covering them like the snow on their shoulders so that only the crunching as their feet compressed the snow against the ground could be heard. Two sets of feet… no, one. Kakuzu stopped.
Hidan turned around to face his partner, “What’s with the hold up?”
Instead of responding, Kakuzu let out a hand, letting the snow build up and melt away on his fingertips and palm; his gaze leading to nowhere. “The warm kind of cold when children laugh and giggle as they throw snow at each other; not through anger, but just for the hell of it. The kind of cold when a mother tend to her hurt child. The kind of cold as we stand here, not exactly happy, but not exactly upset. A happy kind of cold,” his glance moved  over to meet with Hidan’s, “Am I right?”
Hidan smirked, letting out a slight snort. Instead of responding immediately, he crouched down, running his hands through the snow, clumping it together into a ball. Jiggling the snow in his hand, he lightly replied to Kakuzu, “Yeah. That’s the kind.”
©2007-2009 ~heartlesstheif
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Author's Comments

And so they had a snowball fight. XP Um... This is my first posted fanfic here. It's kinda weird.

It's absolute fluff, and I don't think there are any warning...

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Fluff ish gooood! ^^

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Fluffy: Falling for the most unique/eccentric if not insane characters from the very moment she got hooked on anime.
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ohh it's really cute and i can imagine hidan walks like a penguin XDD (funny image)

the fluffness ish great!!! i luv it!!!

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~ stick to me and Imma stick your ass with my 2B pencil XD
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XD Thank you! I'm really glad you loved it. X333

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Yes, now I can finish this because I got distracted at breakfast yesterday!
Please don't beat me anymore. ;.;
I'm working on a series.

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Anyone who can only think of only one way to spell a word obviously lacks imagination. - Mark Twain
:iconheartlesstheif:
Um... too late! *hit* Oh... wait... ok... I'll wait for a bit...

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I really like your fanfc, I think I saw this one on fanfiction. net. I liked the ending the best. Right before Hidan is going to throw a snow ball. If it's not to much of a trouble can you describe Hidan as a character in general. I sort of need help on my fanfic called "Deichan's Daughter" on fanfiction. net
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I'm afraid I'm really not good at describing his character. DX I've been told this is really OOC, so I'm not the best person to ask. IMO I think we got too little Hidan in the manga, not enough to analize him... ;_;

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Yeah, not alot of Hidan. I sort of changed his character in my fanfic. But I still like this fanfic so I added it to my favorites. In my fanfic "Deichan's Daughter" on fanfiction. net Deidara's daughter is picking up his cursing problem.

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The fresh flakes of winter frosted the cave that hid the compound within inside. A tiny blond girl was a wake at the time watching Hidan do unsual activities. She had noticed a big green needled pine tree come through the opening of the compound home that he had lugged to the center of the cozy living room to the side of the fire place. Then taking out a large box in the storage room and decorated the tree with tiny multi-colored lights and glossy silver and gold balls. The pale lighting of the fireplace shone across the spheres reflecting them as tiny jewels. But during the process of Hidan putting the lights up he his eyes got poked by the pine needles and cursed out, apparently he hadn’t noticed the little girl watching. Dara sat on the red lumpy couch with her feet hanging over the ground; half lidded eyes watched this scene.

Dara giggled for a moment and repeated the cursing “Damn it, fuck, fuck, fuck, fuck you stupid tree” while she added a “fuck you Hidan in the curse.” Hidan’s face paled as he heard those words leave from her lips, Deidara was surely going to kill him. Deidara had specifically told him no cursing in front of Dara that it would rub off. Along with the other members of the group including Itachi, because he wanted his daughter to still have that child innocence that slowly went away with each passing year as she learned. “Dara please don’t say those words their not nice ok? If your daddy finds out he’s going to kill me ok?” Then Hidan continued to putting the glass balls up....
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XD That's cute! THough if you want it in character for Hidan, I think he'd be more likely to treaten her then just kindly say stop. XP But it's SOOO cute! Could you give me a link?

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Threaten Deidara's Daughter stop cursing?LOL yeah that would have been funny but it seems like Dara and Hidan are like close buddies in the story or like they spend more time than ever. I really changed Hidan a bit, I have this Hidan Centric story in my Journal entry on deviant art that I won't be publishing. I guess Hidan has a soft side for her, or maybe Dara likes him because he spends more time with her. But Dara loves to torture Itachi in the story.

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